bm to english

i just received my feedback sheet for my essay from my tutor..
seriously i am a bit disappointed... no.. not a bit.. i am disappointed...
seriously teruk....
this is my first time getting a serious kind of feedback...
i did not expected that my essay teruk gila2.. that means sebelum2 ni teruk lah..
cuma i did not get any feedback yg mcm ni.. haish...
ape2 pun.. alhamdulillah... =)

ade hikmah disebalik kejadian.. (haahaaa.. nk sedapkan hati =p)

anyway... dia comment on my grammar.. shot!!!
i knew it.. i had have problems when it comes to grammar...
so..
i think i need to write dalam blog ni in english balik...
kalau ade grammar yang salah.. sila2...
seriously.. sila tegur ja kat comment box...

p.s: sorry sapa yang tak suka sy menulis dalam english.. i have no choice...